Thursday, March 19, 2009

Haiku's and Tonka's

*Bar Stool Love

All I can see here,
In the clouds of withered smoke,
Is your eyes, gray, green
Soft piano melodies float across
A room, divided, by love.

LIBBY
Swinging back and forth,
The wind ripples through your hair.
But, flowers are Stooopid
And die in the cold winter.
So, pick a better image. Libby.

Lonely Mountain
Wasted on a poem,
The mountain crumbles with shame.
Please, remember it.

Burial.
I saw your likeness,
it will bind us, forever.
I lead, you follow.

*Not actually a Tonka, but written in the same style.

2 comments:

  1. I like your haiku and tAnka poems!

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  2. I am in love with Bar Stool Love! I get this fantastic mental image when I read it...I especially like "your eyes, gray, green"

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